hey dude, looks like you're getting the hang of things.
keep it up! :D
i'm sorry :(
i can't say this came anywhere near enjoyable to listen to.
The quality of your recording is awful, the beatboxing isn't so bad.
And like Kaburome said, the melody is pretty messed up -_o
i love this
the music itself is simple. yet very catchy.
It's also the best vocoder work i've heard so far! nicely done!
The burp at 00:39 had me rolling on the floor.
Great stuff, keep it up!
robot slaughterhouse porn?
Nothing exciting to listen to, very slow buildup and no variation.
There are even dissonant notes at 0:46 to 01:01, it just hurts to listen to that.
Try adding some percussion too.
Just bass drum on every 4th gets tedious to listen to after only half a minute.
doesn't remind me of porn either.
maybe robot-death slaughterhouse-themed porn.
mmm, sounds cool though.
Trying to get the percussion down with the program being used currently, though it's more frustrating than fun to mess with. And I had no idea they made porn like that. :D
the only thing bringing you down is the compressing in your post-fx.
It makes the song less dynamic and you can hear the bass drum cutting in on the other sounds.
other than that, i can't think of anything to improve on!
Alright - I'll take a look into that later!
Thanks for the review!!
it catches the atmosphere nicely, follows the original well too.
The only problem i have (yeah, that's personal sorry) is that i hate the sound Image Line Slayer makes >@_@<
keep up the good work
it's been a while since i checked, so i'm back.
You're making pretty decent progress, so keep it up!
it's nice and varied, and i liked what you did with percussion.
However there is no bass line in some bits. (you can get away with that just fine, but don't overdo it)
And like DjDekail said, your songs need some more structure, make sure you build up to a climax, then build that down towards the end, etc.
keep up the good stuff man (again, you're getting there!)
it's like grindcore metal in drum 'n bass form
i dig the crazy style, i thought de screaming and grunting got old pretty quick though.
thanks haha, im planning to have a realy soft section with no vocals or maybe clean vocals later on in the track :)
most people would say this sounds like garbage but i personaly dont think there are any tracks like this is the sort of screaming genres and its always good to try and come up with something new instead of copying what other people have already done :)
not a bad start
so far so good, but you really lack a more full sound,
try using a couple more synths than just the FL piano, it would do your work much more credit.
i like this!
great job, nothing else to say but keep it up!
Thank you :D
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