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niiiiice

I really dig the atmosphere it creates.
This would go well in a horror movie!
kudos.

duuuuude!

you have some nice skills, these songs are club material!
keep it up!

great!

I love the bass sound, and it sounds like you did a great job on the effects.
The melodies are simple but catchy, which is always good.
The only thing i think is bringing it down at this point is the mastering, (the bass drum cuts in on the bass line, you can the compressor dropping the volume on the low frequencies every time the bass drum beats in the busyer parts of the song)
Maybe try higher attack rates in the compressor, or try to have the bass line operate just above the frequencies of the bass drum.
keep up the great stuff, this one's going to be on my car-driving-music selection!

DjYeoh responds:

hahahha have a save trip while listneing! dont get too crazy with the melody and basses hehehe :) Take care!

The basics are there, so far so good.

You have a catchy loop, you play with it and vary it, that's a good start.
The drums and percussion are good, but i'm still missing a lot.
You can't go without an accompanying bassline, especially in this kind of music, it helps the sound 'fill out'.
If you'd added a catchy bassline to go with it, this would have been a very decent loop for use in a game or background menu.
keep it up, you're already showing improvement.

you're not done yet.

The loop in the foreground doesn't match up with the percussion very well...
I'm also missing a decent bass line, and it's kinda repetitive.
If you ask me, you have the beginning of a good song, but it needs work.

good decent trance, but lacks a bit of punch.

I dig the sound and the melody, but the percussion and the bass drum sound a little soft. FPC is nice, but try adding some heavyer samples :)

The overall sound's great could use more variation

It has a nice, full sound to it and the meloldy is great, the only thing bringing it down for me at this point is that it gets kind of repetitive with that same piano loop in the background.
Try working up to a bridge in the song where you change to a different key.
Good work!

T-Free responds:

Thanks for the review, bobafett87, I'll change some parts to make it less repetitive.^^

awesome, like we're used to seeing from you :)

The only gripe i have is the "left right left right" that seems to be a little out of key, and personally i'd have gone with somewhat heavyer percussion (but that's personal i guess).
That aside, another amazing song and instalment to the memory planet series.
I can't help but wonder if they'll strike back somehow :)
Can we has sequel, pretty please?

reported. please read the terms of use.

and catch up on your international copyright laws and rights.
you are not the author of this song, nor the owner of its rights.

Nice

but it would benefit from some heavyer bass-drum ;)

Mr-Dark responds:

Hmm..
Maybe that could work, but I don't know. I have a lot of heavy bass drums, but.. I couldn't find one that sounded right, so I just used this one.
Thanks for your review!

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Rotterdam, Holland

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