bobafett87's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Making a Porn]

robot slaughterhouse porn?

Nothing exciting to listen to, very slow buildup and no variation.
There are even dissonant notes at 0:46 to 01:01, it just hurts to listen to that.
Try adding some percussion too.
Just bass drum on every 4th gets tedious to listen to after only half a minute.

doesn't remind me of porn either.
maybe robot-death slaughterhouse-themed porn.
mmm, sounds cool though.

JoeSomebody2 responds:

Trying to get the percussion down with the program being used currently, though it's more frustrating than fun to mess with. And I had no idea they made porn like that. :D

[_/Closer\_]

do like

good stuff!
the only thing bringing you down is the compressing in your post-fx.
It makes the song less dynamic and you can hear the bass drum cutting in on the other sounds.

other than that, i can't think of anything to improve on!
great!

ShootingStar responds:

Alright - I'll take a look into that later!
Thanks for the review!!

ShootingStar

[Breathing In Bytes (preview)]

it's like grindcore metal in drum 'n bass form

i dig the crazy style, i thought de screaming and grunting got old pretty quick though.

haxorqueen responds:

thanks haha, im planning to have a realy soft section with no vocals or maybe clean vocals later on in the track :)

most people would say this sounds like garbage but i personaly dont think there are any tracks like this is the sort of screaming genres and its always good to try and come up with something new instead of copying what other people have already done :)

[{Dj-L} Essence of Creativity]

i like this!

great job, nothing else to say but keep it up!

Meonly70 responds:

Thank you :D

[~|| I'm thinking of you [Demo]]

The overall sound's great could use more variation

It has a nice, full sound to it and the meloldy is great, the only thing bringing it down for me at this point is that it gets kind of repetitive with that same piano loop in the background.
Try working up to a bridge in the song where you change to a different key.
Good work!

T-Free responds:

Thanks for the review, bobafett87, I'll change some parts to make it less repetitive.^^

[He's a Pirate - Techno Remix]

Nice

but it would benefit from some heavyer bass-drum ;)

Mr-Dark responds:

Hmm..
Maybe that could work, but I don't know. I have a lot of heavy bass drums, but.. I couldn't find one that sounded right, so I just used this one.
Thanks for your review!

[Chaoz - M64fileslct-DnB]

it's way out of synch.

make sure your beats are in synch with your melody, even in DnB.

ChaozTLG responds:

Well, this was a quick project, and to be honest, i dont really notice it being off-sync. I'll keep this in mind when i try other DnB stuff,tho ;)

[Spit on my Dick Shit on my Eye]

hahahahahah awesome

excellent music for my morning breakfast of live babies.

CockRider responds:

Live babies are good. I like getting to the stomach where the bile and stomach acid is. It's all tingly!

[Silver Memory(featuring Hania)]

excellent work

nicely done!
really love what you've done with it.
i gave remixing this a try, but it's hard to fix the synch problems you run into.

(the song's tempo is not entirely consistent)
keep up the good stuff! :D

Kaburorne responds:

Yeah, finally, someone who properly understands the syncing issues I had! Yeah, I was syncing the song in double the original tempo (for more accurate listening), and it ranged from like 150, to about 180 in places. But, I suppose that's because she's into classical piano, and those sort of things use speeding up and slowing down between bars.
But thanks for the rate, comment and most of all listening to my noise :P