niiiiice
I really dig the atmosphere it creates.
This would go well in a horror movie!
kudos.
niiiiice
I really dig the atmosphere it creates.
This would go well in a horror movie!
kudos.
duuuuude!
you have some nice skills, these songs are club material!
keep it up!
The basics are there, so far so good.
You have a catchy loop, you play with it and vary it, that's a good start.
The drums and percussion are good, but i'm still missing a lot.
You can't go without an accompanying bassline, especially in this kind of music, it helps the sound 'fill out'.
If you'd added a catchy bassline to go with it, this would have been a very decent loop for use in a game or background menu.
keep it up, you're already showing improvement.
you're not done yet.
The loop in the foreground doesn't match up with the percussion very well...
I'm also missing a decent bass line, and it's kinda repetitive.
If you ask me, you have the beginning of a good song, but it needs work.
good decent trance, but lacks a bit of punch.
I dig the sound and the melody, but the percussion and the bass drum sound a little soft. FPC is nice, but try adding some heavyer samples :)
The overall sound's great could use more variation
It has a nice, full sound to it and the meloldy is great, the only thing bringing it down for me at this point is that it gets kind of repetitive with that same piano loop in the background.
Try working up to a bridge in the song where you change to a different key.
Good work!
Thanks for the review, bobafett87, I'll change some parts to make it less repetitive.^^
awesome, like we're used to seeing from you :)
The only gripe i have is the "left right left right" that seems to be a little out of key, and personally i'd have gone with somewhat heavyer percussion (but that's personal i guess).
That aside, another amazing song and instalment to the memory planet series.
I can't help but wonder if they'll strike back somehow :)
Can we has sequel, pretty please?
Nice
but it would benefit from some heavyer bass-drum ;)
Hmm..
Maybe that could work, but I don't know. I have a lot of heavy bass drums, but.. I couldn't find one that sounded right, so I just used this one.
Thanks for your review!
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